mikomi Posted October 22, 2007 Share Posted October 22, 2007 My Contribution for October Don't call me yellow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pattricia Posted October 22, 2007 Share Posted October 22, 2007 Mikomi, you always come up with something unusual and this is it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sauerkraut Posted October 23, 2007 Share Posted October 23, 2007 I agree with pattricia - an original approach, and a clever title and closing line. I'd like to know what was in that envelope.... (Minor criticism: it would be even better if you ran a spellcheck over it!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikomi Posted October 23, 2007 Author Share Posted October 23, 2007 I agree with pattricia - an original approach, and a clever title and closing line. I'd like to know what was in that envelope.... (Minor criticism: it would be even better if you ran a spellcheck over it!) I did, but perhaps a little hasty with it, but thanks for your comments. The letter was from Billie, he was already in the house and was there when the others broke in, he set up the rocking chair prank the letter was for Danny as Billie knew full well Danny's curiosity would have to follow the whole thing through the letter was a kind of GOTCHA but sadly it all went wrong . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coyleys Posted October 23, 2007 Share Posted October 23, 2007 Mikomi, i would delete your comment for now, you give the game away. I will comment soon:thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shoeshine Posted October 26, 2007 Share Posted October 26, 2007 I enjoyed reading the story mikomi. It's a worthy contribution to this month's theme. As coyleys mentioned, it would be best if you considered editing your explanatory "follow-up" post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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