stuartryder Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 You shake like you’re climbing a rope: pulling yourself up out of a pit, scrabbling on its blackmoss walls. I wake, chased by Alsatians while a fireball splits the sky and races for the horizon – a line I’ll never see. You wake. You tease the sweat from my caked hair; you the carrier of our future, the drift of my duvet’s hills and glens. I make origami of our beddings: a floating swan to swim us down the river, to choose a harbour. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malanimal Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 Very Good! Really like it, the metaphorical gubbins is very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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