scotty225 Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 Any comments are very welcome especialy about punctuation. Never did get the hang of ,.;:'!"? Thanks May poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pattricia Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 Dont worry about punctuation at first. Just get your story down.It was good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Blanco Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 Hi Scotty, May's poem seems to (quite rightly) possess a sunnier disposition than April's. I particularly liked: ‘till summer sits, upon its’ baking rock though its''s apostrophe should possibly make its way (tail between its legs) three lines down and a bit to the left to take a sip of nature's nectar... i think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tallyman Posted May 7, 2008 Share Posted May 7, 2008 Hi Scotty A very warming poem - I could feel the sun on my back Some lovely phrases indeed. I agree with Ron about the apostrophe! Excuse my ignorance (what with being a philistine and all) but does the cuckoo 'steel' or 'steal' the pantomime? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scotty225 Posted May 7, 2008 Author Share Posted May 7, 2008 Oops, yep the cuckoo definitely is supposed to nick it mate. That's just my clumsiness and trust in the spell checker. Thats the problem with me I want this machine to do my thinking for me. Thanks for pointing that out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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