Rich Posted September 29, 2008 Share Posted September 29, 2008 Here goes Lots of gripping action and drama enfolding, enjoy! OK I know wrestling's not to everyone's taste, but enjoy it as a story instead of moaning about the subject matter please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scribe Posted October 1, 2008 Share Posted October 1, 2008 The thing is Rich stories about a wrestling tournaments aren't that exciting.I read a bit but found it lacking any credibility a bit like wrestling you know its all a fix before the fight begins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shoeshine Posted October 1, 2008 Share Posted October 1, 2008 Rich, your writing and contributions (as I've posted before on this Section) are welcomed and the quality is appreciated. Could you, perhaps give us a contribution concerning a holiday you've had, or "your best day out, ever" sort of thing? This invitation from me is extended to any SF Member who would like to give it a try, too ... whatever your age/abilities in writing may be. Write about anything you really enjoyed ...... and it will be appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sauerkraut Posted October 2, 2008 Share Posted October 2, 2008 Rich, I've never listened to any wrestling commentary but I can imagine it from this story. You can hear the excitable sports commentator enjoying the match (bout?). For the backstage bits, I wonder if it might help to separate this out a bit more from the flow of commentary. Perhaps the commentator could hand over to a colleague conducting interviews behind the scenes. Just an idea . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marksherbert Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 that was hilarious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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