Falls Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 The Shining Path Here it is, the "New" and "Improved" (may be) version of this story complete with a conclusion. Remember, its a ficticous war story so it has a war story ending. http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1235251553.doc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Blanco Posted March 1, 2009 Share Posted March 1, 2009 Hi Falls, I enjoyed the whole story. To me, it was very interesting, very serious and yet with a strong sense of humour. The ending was very effective, I thought. I will now be pondering on that as I attempt to go to sleep. Thanks Ron ps At first I thought the Golf Tournament was a bit tenuous, but then I thought probably you would say that it actually happened. Am I right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falls Posted March 2, 2009 Author Share Posted March 2, 2009 Hi Falls, I enjoyed the whole story. To me, it was very interesting, very serious and yet with a strong sense of humour. The ending was very effective, I thought. I will now be pondering on that as I attempt to go to sleep. Thanks Ron ps At first I thought the Golf Tournament was a bit tenuous, but then I thought probably you would say that it actually happened. Am I right? Hi Ron, Yes, the excuse about not send the right people because of a Golf Tournament was true I wasn't on the short end of the bargain that time. I'll tell you about my own short-end experience another time. Best Regards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.