soft ayperth Posted May 11, 2009 Share Posted May 11, 2009 This is my second submission to the Forum. I think it fits the criteria set down for theme of the month. But, if you think it's a bit of a stretch, please evaluate it on its own merits. All feedback welcome. thanks: http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1242053835.doc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coyleys Posted May 11, 2009 Share Posted May 11, 2009 Well, I thought that was excellent rogG. Great stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Blanco Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 Very moving rogC. I read it a few days ago, and it has stuck with me, so that's a good sign. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soft ayperth Posted May 17, 2009 Author Share Posted May 17, 2009 Thanks for your kind comments. Don't know what made me write that piece but I wrote it a while ago, then added the first paragraph to try and fit the theme of the month. In retrospect, I probably should have left it alone, let it be viewed on its own merits. By trying to make it fit, it seems a bit contrived. Just my self-critical thoughts. Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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