Ron Blanco Posted October 31, 2009 Share Posted October 31, 2009 Here's my contribution for October, although it's only vaguely related to the topics. It is an opening to a longer story, albeit not as lively an opening as Mantaspook requested. You may also find a little cloud in there. http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1256996480.doc I'd appreciate comments and criticisms, but also suggestions for where it might go... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falls Posted November 1, 2009 Share Posted November 1, 2009 Hi Ron, Don't keep us in suspense, this is good. Does Ed strangle his mother or does She poison him with the Parsnips? We need the rest of the story. Regards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Blanco Posted November 10, 2009 Author Share Posted November 10, 2009 Don't keep us in suspense, this is good. Does Ed strangle his mother or does She poison him with the Parsnips? Thanks Falls. I don't know what the rest of the story is yet, though I do agree that Mrs Johnson's vegetables should feature heavily! Any more suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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