Falls Posted November 1, 2009 Share Posted November 1, 2009 Hello, I'd been think about the October theme for most of the month but only began to put ink-to-paper this afternoon. Here it is therefore, typos and all. http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1257039145.doc Note: It may be November 1st in England by the time this arrives but its still October here for another 2 hours and 15 minutes. Regards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Blanco Posted November 10, 2009 Share Posted November 10, 2009 Hi again falls, In some ways I think this is written better than the horse story, but doesn't quite have the same potential to leave a mark. Is it an excerpt from a novel of yours? Also, is it significant that the other passenger is a mullah? Please ignore me if I am being slow at picking up a profound moment in the story. I like the reference to the marching band. I also noticed a spelling mistake. I think shear panic should have been sheer panic... unless he woke up worrying about cutting his hedge? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coyleys Posted November 10, 2009 Share Posted November 10, 2009 Another good one Falls. I think your writing improves with every story written, as Ron asked ‘Is it an excerpt from a novel of yours?’ I think it must be and would love to read the full story, if not, that has got to be your next task. Good man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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