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Ernest Hemingway

 

"All thinking men are atheists."

 

On page 144 of Paul Johnson's book Intellectuals, it states that despite being raised in a strict Congregationalist household, Ernest "did not only not believe in God but regarded organized religion as a menace to human happiness", "seems to have been devoid of the religious spirit", and "ceased to practise religion at the earliest possible moment."

Other's have pointed out that Hemingway used the non-existence of God as a theme in his books.

 

- Ernest Hemingway, American author (1899-1961).

 

Reading about Hemingway's views on religion is almost as boring as reading his books

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Hell’s Abyss

 

Death did beckon me from a dark decaying pit

‘Your time has come’ the hooded figure growled

‘For all eternity here is place that you will sit’

You may find the air in here a little fouled’

 

I replied ‘No thank you sir, perhaps another time’

He said ‘You will come now, I must insist’

I felt myself get drawn towards the pit of filthy slime

By a strong, dark force that I could not resist

 

Slowly but surely I approached Hell’s dark abyss

The fear was sending dew drops down my spine

I saw decaying corpses and I heard an evil hiss

As serpents writhed in seas of boiling brine

 

A large bat with a monkey’s face circled overhead

A tentacle was curled around my wrist

A grinning demon cackled ‘Come hither join the Dead’

A tortured scream came through a cold grey mist

 

I braced myself to fall, as I knew I had no choice

For Hell’s dungeons I was clearly next in line

Suddenly there boomed a deep and timbrous voice

‘You cannot have him Satan, he is mine’

 

An Angel beckoned me from a pool of golden light

Her sweet voice said ‘in Heaven you will dwell

For all eternity you’ll be protected by God’s might’

Thus I escaped the dark abyss of Hell

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Hell’s Abyss

 

Death did beckon me from a dark decaying pit

‘Your time has come’ the hooded figure growled

‘For all eternity here is place that you will sit’

You may find the air in here a little fouled’

 

I replied ‘No thank you sir, perhaps another time’

He said ‘You will come now, I must insist’

I felt myself get drawn towards the pit of filthy slime

By a strong, dark force that I could not resist

 

Slowly but surely I approached Hell’s dark abyss

The fear was sending dew drops down my spine

I saw decaying corpses and I heard an evil hiss

As serpents writhed in seas of boiling brine

 

A large bat with a monkey’s face circled overhead

A tentacle was curled around my wrist

A grinning demon cackled ‘Come hither join the Dead’

A tortured scream came through a cold grey mist

 

I braced myself to fall, as I knew I had no choice

For Hell’s dungeons I was clearly next in line

Suddenly there boomed a deep and timbrous voice

‘You cannot have him Satan, he is mine’

 

An Angel beckoned me from a pool of golden light

Her sweet voice said ‘in Heaven you will dwell

For all eternity you’ll be protected by God’s might’

Thus I escaped the dark abyss of Hell

 

 

Who wrote it Lucian Scott? Well written but unconvincing in todays world.

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Who wrote it Lucian Scott? Well written but unconvincing in todays world.

 

Hi Jobee,

Dunno who Lucian Scott is, I wrote it myself.

I didn't really mean it to convince anyone of anything, I just wrote whatever came into my head and had no idea what the ending would be when I started the first verse

Mind you, I agree it is a bit on the 'idyllic' side :)

And thanks for the compliment

Merry Crimbo

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In that case, I'm impressed.

 

Thanks! How about this one? I previously posted this in the Writer's Section

 

 

Bolibar

 

When the mutant child was born

The Piper at the gates of dawn

Played a dirge into the night

The Devil laughed with such delight

And cried ‘He is my spawn’

 

His hands were claws, his face a scar

They kept him in a brown glass jar

In a dark, damp cellar stowed away

That never saw the light of day

They named him Bolibar

 

He grew into a hideous thing

Scaly skin with hair like string

Poor Bolibar, he yearned so much

To feel his mother’s loving touch

To hear her sweet voice sing

 

But no words reached his shapeless ears

No friends had he throughout the years

Cold winter nights he slept unclad

But never cried, because he had

No eyes to shed the tears

 

His mother wished her son deceased

Considered him as Satan’s beast

And when the demons in her head

Convinced her he’d be better dead

Her conscience was released

 

Her spouse agreed the mutant birth

To keep alive had no real worth

They swore to keep a grisly pact

And carry out the final act

To end his time on Earth

 

They came and sealed the jar of glass

And pumped in lethal toxic gas

Alone he drew his final breath

Alone he journeyed after death

To join the Devil’s mass

 

When the mutant child had died

The Piper cast his pipes aside

And as the sun sank in the West

The Devil welcomed his new guest

As Angels watched, and cried

 

A year after the murderous deed

The mother found herself with seed

A perfect baby girl she bore

A child she could at last adore

Fulfilled her every need

 

The Piper played a mournful song

The birth would never right the wrong

No cellar dark for this young lass

No brown glass jar, no whiff of gas

She would grow tall and strong

 

God heard the Piper’s mournful dirge

Enlightenment came with a surge

Only then He knew He’d failed

A plan must henceforth be unveiled

For the Devil’s Den to purge

 

He summoned forth Celexequoste

The mightiest of the Angel host

And told him he must go in quest

To free the Devil’s latest guest

And silence Satan’s boast

 

The Angel journeyed long and far

And now he stood on Hell’s dark star

He strode up to the Devil’s door

Satan heard his timbrous roar

‘I’ve come for Bolibar’

 

The Devil’s firm resolve grew weak

As he heard the mighty Angel speak

At last poor Bolibar was freed

The Angel placed him on his steed

Then kissed him on his cheek

 

A surge of Heaven’s joy and bliss

A stream of tears for an Angel’s kiss

Up in the night a shooting star

Flared for the one named Bolibar

And made the Devil hiss

 

The mutant child climbed Heaven’s stair

To be greeted by the Angels, where

They placed in front of Bolibar

Fragments of a brown glass jar

Smashed beyond repair

 

The End

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Hi Jobee,

Dunno who Lucian Scott is, I wrote it myself.

I didn't really mean it to convince anyone of anything, I just wrote whatever came into my head and had no idea what the ending would be when I started the first verse

Mind you, I agree it is a bit on the 'idyllic' side :)

And thanks for the compliment

Merry Crimbo

 

Lyrics by Lucian Scott band.

 

http://www.lucianscott.com/lyrics.html

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Thanks! How about this one? I previously posted this in the Writer's Section

 

 

Bolibar

 

When the mutant child was born

The Piper at the gates of dawn

Played a dirge into the night

The Devil laughed with such delight

And cried ‘He is my spawn’

 

His hands were claws, his face a scar

They kept him in a brown glass jar

In a dark, damp cellar stowed away

That never saw the light of day

They named him Bolibar

 

He grew into a hideous thing

Scaly skin with hair like string

Poor Bolibar, he yearned so much

To feel his mother’s loving touch

To hear her sweet voice sing

 

But no words reached his shapeless ears

No friends had he throughout the years

Cold winter nights he slept unclad

But never cried, because he had

No eyes to shed the tears

 

His mother wished her son deceased

Considered him as Satan’s beast

And when the demons in her head

Convinced her he’d be better dead

Her conscience was released

 

Her spouse agreed the mutant birth

To keep alive had no real worth

They swore to keep a grisly pact

And carry out the final act

To end his time on Earth

 

They came and sealed the jar of glass

And pumped in lethal toxic gas

Alone he drew his final breath

Alone he journeyed after death

To join the Devil’s mass

 

When the mutant child had died

The Piper cast his pipes aside

And as the sun sank in the West

The Devil welcomed his new guest

As Angels watched, and cried

 

A year after the murderous deed

The mother found herself with seed

A perfect baby girl she bore

A child she could at last adore

Fulfilled her every need

 

The Piper played a mournful song

The birth would never right the wrong

No cellar dark for this young lass

No brown glass jar, no whiff of gas

She would grow tall and strong

 

God heard the Piper’s mournful dirge

Enlightenment came with a surge

Only then He knew He’d failed

A plan must henceforth be unveiled

For the Devil’s Den to purge

 

He summoned forth Celexequoste

The mightiest of the Angel host

And told him he must go in quest

To free the Devil’s latest guest

And silence Satan’s boast

 

The Angel journeyed long and far

And now he stood on Hell’s dark star

He strode up to the Devil’s door

Satan heard his timbrous roar

‘I’ve come for Bolibar’

 

The Devil’s firm resolve grew weak

As he heard the mighty Angel speak

At last poor Bolibar was freed

The Angel placed him on his steed

Then kissed him on his cheek

 

A surge of Heaven’s joy and bliss

A stream of tears for an Angel’s kiss

Up in the night a shooting star

Flared for the one named Bolibar

And made the Devil hiss

 

The mutant child climbed Heaven’s stair

To be greeted by the Angels, where

They placed in front of Bolibar

Fragments of a brown glass jar

Smashed beyond repair

 

The End

 

I reckon the Scott outfit could use your lyrics .

 

http://www.lucianscott.com/lyrics.html

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