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To this point is my mind reduced by your fault, my girl,

and has so ruined itself by its own devotion,

that now it can neither wish you well though you should become the best of women,

nor cease to love you though you do the worst that can be done.

 

that's deeeep man :D

 

you get dumped by this bird den?

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Snow is falling

 

Snow is falling

From the sky above

Snow is falling

Put on scarf and glove

 

Snow is falling

Go look outside

Snow is falling

The old landscape it hide

 

Snow is falling

What a beautiful sight

Snow is falling

It sparkles in the light

 

Snow is falling

Soft cotton wool flakes

Snow is falling

A white blanket it makes

 

Snow is falling

Short flowers disappear

Snow is falling

The cold is here

 

Snow is falling

Its time to play

Snow is falling

Lets make snowmen today :)

 

Micron

 

Appalling. If a ten year old had written it, fair play. If it was an adult, it's just very poor indeed.

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The Prophet

 

You were born together, and together you shall be forevermore.

You shall be together when the white wings of death scatter your days.

Ay, you shall be together even in the silent memory of God.

But let there be spaces in your togetherness,

And let the winds of heavens dance between you.

 

Love one another, but make not a bond of love:

Let it rather be a moving sea between the shores of your souls.

Fill each other's cup but drink not from one cup.

Give one another of your bread but eat not from the same loaf.

Sing and dance together and be joyous, but let each one of you be alone,

Even as the strings of a lute are alone though they quiver with the same music.

 

Give your hearts, but not into each other's keeping.

For only the hand of Life can contain your hearts.

And stand together yet not too near together:

For the pillars of the temple stand apart,

And the oak tree and the cypress grow not in each other's shadow

Khalil Gabran

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I'm trying to write a limerick that starts "There once was a man from Sri Lanka", but I'm struggling to find rhyming words for the rest of it. Can anyone help?

 

From Sri Lanka there was a man

who rhymed bcause he can

reverse the word

and this occurred

each time the rhyme began.

hazel

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that's deeeep man :D

 

you get dumped by this bird den?

 

Nah, that's Catallus. If I could write with a hundredth of his talent or have a hundredth of all the random Roman sex he had I would be a very happy person.

 

I like that poem because it sort of sums up that stage when you are with someone and you have got beyond liking them or disliking them and it's just bloody annoying and reducing your brain to emotional mush. I also love the way Catallus calls the woman in question (rumour has it she was another man's bird - naughty naughty :P) "my girl". I think the Latin is puella.

 

(although saying that I now have a horrid feeling I made a balls up of the quotation and in that actual poem he uses the term Lesbia rather than puella :(:suspect:)

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This tanker

that was from Sri Lanka

that sailed up the Don

which Don was it on?

and who was the one that sank her

 

hazel

 

He sailed the ship quite slow

From the city of Columbo

But drove it much faster

When passing Doncaster

Who sank her? 'Twas I, MBO!

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