jo7471969 Posted April 6, 2010 Share Posted April 6, 2010 That's lovely Jason...get it posted! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sharon C Posted April 6, 2010 Share Posted April 6, 2010 I tend to find myself with carefree 21-26 year old females who are happy to just have some mutual fun both physical and non physical for a while, it suits us both. They get out of it as much as I do. The relationships do mean something to me, they are fun, non complicated, enjoyable usually long term friendships. There is nothing wrong with risking hurt, its risking a huge part of my net worth that I have built up that I have an issue with. I am reading this thread with interest ,just wondered Cad if you go dutch when you and your current girlfriend go out and about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rubydazzler Posted April 6, 2010 Share Posted April 6, 2010 That's great!! If I was 30 years younger I'd date you myself!! Now get it posted and get looking at who's out there looking for you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CheekyBandit Posted April 6, 2010 Share Posted April 6, 2010 ooooh! Panther Rose, get your coat, You've pulled! La Panthère Rose - :love::love: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panther Rose Posted April 6, 2010 Share Posted April 6, 2010 take 2 of my profile, is this ok??? I am a youthful and attractive 30 year old, whose ultimate goal is to find a like-minded woman to share my life with, settle down and have all the things a serious relationship has to offer. In my leisure time, i enjoy keep fit by hiking the outdoors and going to the gym. I enjoy quiet nights in, where I can cook listen to music and tinker with my computer. I enjoy going to the cinema, socialising, meeting new people and having fun at trance clubs. I consider myself to be both friendly and charming. I have a fantastic personality and a great sense of humour to go with it . I have a very serious passionate side with lots of good hidden qualities that will appeal to the ladies. I would like my future partner to share some of my comon interests, passions and personality. Let's hope we can get together soon xxx Your second profile sounds more appealing than your first attempt. I've amended it slightly for you. See what you think and other members on here. Look at the bold writing. Hope it sounds ok. If only you were nearer my age, I would have grabbed up by now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghostrider Posted April 6, 2010 Share Posted April 6, 2010 This profile sounds very better and more appealing that your first attempt however, I've amended it slightly for you. Look at the bold writing. If only you were nearer my age, I would have grabbed up by now Im on "plenty of fish", all you have to do is find me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panther Rose Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 How do I find you on plenty of fish? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghostrider Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 How do I find you on plenty of fish? Seek and thou shalt find :hihi: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nerd Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 Hi Jason, take 2 sounds much better, get it posted and let us know when cupids arrow strikes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EdnaKrabappe Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 Your second profile sounds more appealing than your first attempt. I've amended it slightly for you. See what you think and other members on here. Look at the bold writing. Hope it sounds ok. If only you were nearer my age, I would have grabbed up by now Orginal post by Jason I am a youthful and attractive 30 year old, whose ultimate goal is to find a like-minded woman to share my life with, settle down and have all the things a serious relationship has to offer. Share your life? What about hers? Cut out the my! In my leisure time, i enjoy keeping fit by hiking, the outdoors and going to the gym. I enjoy quiet nights in, where I can cook, listen to music and tinker with my computer. I enjoy going to the cinema, socialising, meeting new people and having fun at trance clubs. Take out the socialising bit - if you don't enjoy this, you are weird so don't mention it or just put "the usual going out". If you like trance clubs - perhaps mention your favourite one so people can feel an affinity to you. Also don't miss out the commas, they are very important! I'd also make more of the cooking if that's a speciality to you, I've never met a woman who really doesn't like food yet! I consider myself to be both friendly and charming. I have a fantastic personality and a great sense of humour to go with it . I have a very serious passionate side with lots of good hidden qualities that will appeal to the ladies. Get rid of this bit -I know it was yours panther rose but it makes you sound seedy "appealing to the ladies" - like you have a medallion or something. Also the hidden bits, what you've got bodies in your wardrobe or something? Also serious and passionate don't really go together. I'd make those two separate qualities. I would like my future partner to share some of my comon interests, passions and personality. Let's hope we can get together soon xxx Don't say your interests are common, (you've used it as an adjective here) Say you'd like "some interests in common" or you'd "share some common interests" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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