123456A Posted October 18, 2010 Share Posted October 18, 2010 Your 'statement' may indicate that you suffer from schizophrenia. You 'chase yourself' ? Your 'experience' section needs to remove the words 'acted' which could be interpreted that you 'pretended' or were not in control of your position. If you wish to step into a more public role at university, ask someone to reword the facebook post for you to enhance the credibility of your experience and to give a better overview of your personality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LilyTu Posted October 18, 2010 Author Share Posted October 18, 2010 Your 'statement' may indicate that you suffer from schizophrenia. You 'chase yourself' ? Your 'experience' section needs to remove the words 'acted' which could be interpreted that you 'pretended' or were not in control of your position. If you wish to step into a more public role at university, ask someone to reword the facebook post for you to enhance the credibility of your experience and to give a better overview of your personality. Yah, actually I wanna say " embrace myself", thank you for your kind suggestions!~ Since the competition is undergoing now, I will be more careful about my misunderstanding of words.. Many thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsxdy Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 I know presentation is very significant in universities in the UK, so I want to promote my real ability of it. Thank u Amazing,Lily, my dear friend,I'm so glad to see you here and I think I definitely will vote you. In addition, I will also call on my friends to vote you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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