silent angel Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 A tear of heroin Shed a tear an fall to your knees put your hands together an beg for please Its time to face all your enemies The biggest one is under your thumb Its the reason you feel so glum Its the reason you stole from your mum Its the reason your all on your jack those hands of time carnt tik back I have all the wright words in the back of my mind headz a blank carnt unwind Take a puff then the words appear smoky in front of ma face theres no one here they have been tacken by the empty space Shed a tear an realize that your lost there is no way back from this road you just crossed see its an injection of hate your own self infliction but to late copyright 2010 tie up Ur arm an push the pulse hard drive in the dirty needle with no regard pull the cord tyt feel Ur arm popping as poison flushes Ur veins Ur heart near stopping A key point in life the blade pressed against your pulse wants your life think about your kids your family your wife nothing is worth this thought in your mind if you carnt get over the wall then a ladder you must find climb climb climb to the sunny other side its a mental battle its a ghost ride take a deep breath as your now a proud man you have given it everything all you can i have it back that possibility glow i have taken the darkness out of my rainbow Writern by simon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doom bringer Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 prison poems theres loads of those and others http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/family/prison-poems.asp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silent angel Posted March 6, 2011 Author Share Posted March 6, 2011 so is it not a good one ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rubydazzler Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 so is it not a good one ?Is this poem actually written by your son? I'm not quite sure what doombringer's comment means? Is he saying that this poem is copied from the site he's linked too? I think it gives someone like me with no experience of it, an insight into the world of an addict and a glimmering of what it must be like to be enslaved by a drug. All writing is cathartic, so it probably helped him as well? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silent angel Posted March 6, 2011 Author Share Posted March 6, 2011 Is this poem actually written by your son? I'm not quite sure what doombringer's comment means? Is he saying that this poem is copied from the site he's linked too? I think it gives someone like me with no experience of it, an insight into the world of an addict and a glimmering of what it must be like to be enslaved by a drug. All writing is cathartic, so it probably helped him as well? yes he's thought it all up by himself the things he comes out with is unbelievable he's not copied it if that's doombringer means i don't think he even knew about jail poetry he calls it urban poetry i just think he's got real talent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geza Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 Powerful stuff. I agree, Silent Angel, I think your son has real talent too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pattricia Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 Powerful stuff. I agree, Silent Angel, I think your son has real talent too. Put it to rap music and youve got a great song. Rap music has rhythm . Here is a struggling songwriter waiting to get out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silent angel Posted March 6, 2011 Author Share Posted March 6, 2011 Put it to rap music and youve got a great song. Rap music has rhythm . Here is a struggling songwriter waiting to get out. he went to a event last night i carnt remember the name & there was someone there who is intreasted in him they have got a record contract he told me thair names & like a pillock i can not remember there names apparentley they are well known people was realy intreasted in him i think its onley a matter of time for him so watch this space will keep you updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fabcakes Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 good luck to your son silent angel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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