*Peaches* Posted March 17, 2011 Share Posted March 17, 2011 I've been working on this for a few weeks now, wanting some opinions please Tired of thinking Sick of feeling Numb from dreaming Of things that will never change Tired of hurting Sick of wanting Numb from crying Tears that keep falling Tired of searching Sick of waiting Numb from trying To accept what I have become Beginning to heal Starting to feel Wanting to reveal The way you made me change Beginning to wonder Starting to live Wanting to believe Life is worth another try Beginning to trust Starting to love Wanting to learn How to trust again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Blanco Posted May 16, 2011 Share Posted May 16, 2011 Hi Peaches, In my opinion it expresses, quite nicely, that feeling of emerging from a depression, perhaps as a result of a failed relationship. Ultimately an optimistic poem, and one of hope, I would say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pip Morgan Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 This flows nicely, the rhythm seems to be fine and I feel it could explain a lot of situations that people go through in their lives. I can see the feeling of depression or deep feelings, but also that this particular person is trying to find peace and calm in their lives. Pip Morgan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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