Mosherchik Posted December 10, 2003 Author Share Posted December 10, 2003 It aint essay its a script Im reworking cos ending is a bit cheesy and predictable. so naturally Im gonna make it true to life. its gonna end on a bittersweet note. that should please the tutor! Have a look at me essay again tomorrow, that was last nights concern and Im putting it off again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mosherchik Posted December 10, 2003 Author Share Posted December 10, 2003 Doh I have found a new distraction! Cd playing on Real Player, visualisation is Annabelle the Sheep! She's pink and punky and moshing away to MUSE + I feel ready to join in Go go you crazy wool machine! I am going back to my work......I am.......! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agent Dan Posted December 10, 2003 Share Posted December 10, 2003 Oh really? You don't sound like you're working too hard... Do you do theatre, media or english if you're script writing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaBouncer Posted December 10, 2003 Share Posted December 10, 2003 Originally posted by Mosherchik It aint essay its a script Im reworking cos ending is a bit cheesy and predictable. so naturally Im gonna make it true to life. its gonna end on a bittersweet note. that should please the tutor! Have a look at me essay again tomorrow, that was last nights concern and Im putting it off again! Script huh, nice Movie, Play, TV or Other? I'm more of a screenwriter myself (never published, since I'm still perfecting the first), and I'm down to my 4th rewrite so far. Like to come back to it every now and again. What's your influences, what genre do you write? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mosherchik Posted December 10, 2003 Author Share Posted December 10, 2003 Its a romantic comedy drama screenplay! based pretty much on true life! Im a Media Student at Hallam 2nd year and having a ball Stress!!!! anyways off to have a shower gotta get ready to go c Eddie at Arena! got mate coming round in 20mins GAH! cyas xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaBouncer Posted December 10, 2003 Share Posted December 10, 2003 Originally posted by Mosherchik Its a romantic comedy drama screenplay! based pretty much on true life! Im a Media Student at Hallam 2nd year and having a ball Stress!!!! anyways off to have a shower gotta get ready to go c Eddie at Arena! got mate coming round in 20mins GAH! cyas xxx Romantic comedies are not my forte, much prefer Thriller/Serial Killer/Horror genre when writing. However, would be more than happy to give the play a once over for you... some constructive feedback. PM me if you like and I'll supply email details for ya. I may even do the same as soon as I'm happy with my creation. Have fun @ the arena. Toodle Pips! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agent Dan Posted December 10, 2003 Share Posted December 10, 2003 Originally posted by DaBouncer ... would be more than happy to give the play a once over for you ... some constructive feedback. Likewise! I mainly write very silly comedies. More of a purveyor of action/thriller/horror than a writer, so if YOU want an objective opinion DB let me know!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiyabeing Posted December 11, 2003 Share Posted December 11, 2003 Originally posted by Mosherchik Doh I have found a new distraction! Cd playing on Real Player, visualisation is Annabelle the Sheep! She's pink and punky and moshing away to MUSE + I feel ready to join in Go go you crazy wool machine! I am going back to my work......I am.......! Annabelle the Sheep is the BEST ever. Make sure you watch all the different dances - I convinced myself that the type of music resulted in different versions. Don't have a fully formulated theory that I can remember tho' just more bass resulted in more hardcore dancing and v.v. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaBouncer Posted December 11, 2003 Share Posted December 11, 2003 Originally posted by Agent Dan Likewise! I mainly write very silly comedies. More of a purveyor of action/thriller/horror than a writer, so if YOU want an objective opinion DB let me know!! I will keep you in mind AD..... cheers for the offer dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Rock Posted December 11, 2003 Share Posted December 11, 2003 I was going to add something to this but I can't remember what I was going to put. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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