Geza Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 I have decided to delete this post for personal reasons. Geza Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upinwath Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 I'll bet that's true of a good few people. Nicely put. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Blanco Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 Very thought-provoking, Geza. And quite poetic. Given my alcoholic username I suppose I ought to present Alcohol's side of the argument, but maybe now's not the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geza Posted June 6, 2011 Author Share Posted June 6, 2011 Thanks for your comments, upinwath and Ron Blanco. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
De Batz Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 I like the rhythm of your writing, to the extent that it reads 'out loud' in my head. It's a cute (as in clever) turnaround at the end, which I don't see telegraphed in the preceding two paragraphs, even on a repeated read. Do you / have you / will you write in the same sort of cadence but on a more expansive platform? Is there anything on here to look at (I will of course check after typing this)? Andy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geza Posted June 7, 2011 Author Share Posted June 7, 2011 Hi De Batz- there are other examples of my writing on here- not much though; Solitude a short gothic style horror, and the entry to the January comp- A new Start- my entry to the February comp 'February phone calls'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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