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This thread is intended to give examples of poor English used by officials, as seen by SF members, and how it could be written more clearly. Please post examples BUT only if your version is an improvement.

 

Those council banners on London Road always make me cringe. There's a series of them saying "Sharrow Loves It's Streets", "Sharrow Loves It's Music", "Sharrow Loves It's Graffiti", etcetera.

 

Not only is the notion preposterous and a compete waste of money, but the word is spelt "its", not "it's".

 

"It's" means "it is", so the banners say "Sharrow Loves It Is Streets", which is meaningless.

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Those council banners on London Road always make me cringe. There's a series of them saying "Sharrow Loves It's Streets", "Sharrow Loves It's Music", "Sharrow Loves It's Graffiti", etcetera.

 

Not only is the notion preposterous and a compete waste of money, but the word is spelt "its", not "it's".

 

"It's" means "it is", so the banners say "Sharrow Loves It Is Streets", which is meaningless.

 

I always thought the comma could also be used to show ownership of something?

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No, that's an apostrophe, and only applies in certain circumstances;).

 

Sorry I meant an apostrophe. I blame the fact it 6am and I've only just got up. Surely in the example you give the music Sharrow loves does belong to them?

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