sheff1johnny Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 Hi I was just wanting to get some honest feedback to this story. I've tried writing it in the second person. It's about a man who may or may not be a murderer. I just want to know if the idea works, or if its too confusing. http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1323356267.doc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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