llamatron Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 I don't find it in the least bit rank, personally. That was probably one of the better sex bits. yet another example of our complete oppositeness! I cannot compute that you would not find that disgusting:gag: In fact I can't even discuss it yuk yuk yuk! Anyone ever felt the need to bleach their brain? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeffrey Shaw Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 I don't find it in the least bit rank, personally. That was probably one of the better sex bits. But not top rank. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
llamatron Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 "He reaches between my legs and pulls on the blue string...what! And...gently pulls my tampon out and tosses it into the nearby toilet." Either the reviewer has changed the text or that is disgusting (and now for the bleach) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suffragette1 Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 "He reaches between my legs and pulls on the blue string...what! And...gently pulls my tampon out and tosses it into the nearby toilet." Either the reviewer has changed the text or that is disgusting (and now for the bleach) It's badly written, like the rest of the book, but nothing wrong with the concept. It could have been worse!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JackLakeland Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 Its a good job it wasn't published in my youth. The tampon scene would have been replaced by a big whopping Dr Whites with the volume of a single mattress. Strapped in place by a string around the waist... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
llamatron Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 It's bay written, like the rest of the book, but nothing wrong with the concept. It could have been worse!! :gag:There is no way of writing that concept well:gag: :gag::gag: no just no no no! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
llamatron Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 Its a good job it wasn't published in my youth. The tampon scene would have been replaced by a big whopping Dr Whites with the volume of a single mattress. Strapped in place by a string around the waist... My ears:o Maybe van gogh got told of his mate doing this and thats why he removed his ear! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lubylou12 Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 You can buy a top shelf jazz mag for a couple of quid. The stories in that are of the same standard. Thanks for the advice:roll: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suffragette1 Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 :gag:There is no way of writing that concept well:gag: :gag::gag: no just no no no! Shall I rewrite it?! There was a scene along similar lines in Endless Love, far more graphic than that, which is very clinical. James could have made a lot more of it, he (Christian) should have used his teeth for starters! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chumley Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 Saw lots of ladies reading this on the beach last couple of weeks. Had to chuckle at one cos her hubby was reading Model Rail magazine - think she might be waiting a long time for her dreams to come true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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