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I've tried, but my grammar is weak. If somebody better than me has done it I'd like to see:

 

ex hanc diem, duo animae committunt

decimus september MMXI

sperare qui amor noster per endum annum crescit.

 

Literally:

From this day, to souls come together

10th Septmber 2011

To hope that our love grows through the passing years.

 

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Edit: If this is going to be a tattoo, don't use my translation. It's weak. I couldn't work out the subordinate clause in "to hope that ...."

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I've tried, but my grammar is weak. If somebody better than me has done it I'd like to see:

 

ex hanc diem, duo animae committunt

decimus september MMXI

sperare qui amor noster per endum annus crescit.

 

Literally:

From this day, to souls come together

10th Septmber 2011

To hope that our love grows through the passing years.

 

Two

 

The English is incorrect let alone the Latin !

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I've tried, but my grammar is weak. If somebody better than me has done it I'd like to see:

 

ex hanc diem, duo animae committunt

decimus september MMXI

sperare qui amor noster per endum annum crescit.

 

Literally:

From this day, to souls come together

10th Septmber 2011

To hope that our love grows through the passing years.

I'm not sure about that:

a. Septmber; nor

b. qui which might need to be 'ut' plus accusative clause; nor

c. endum annum which ought to be plural.

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qui which might need to be 'ut' plus accusative clause

The accusative couldn't be the subject of the verb. It may be ut, but then that would be subjunctive. That's beyond my skill. :) I'd like to see a proper translatation - I bet mine is miles out.

 

c. endum annum which ought to be plural.

I agree, but can a gerund be plural?

As I say, it's beyond my skill. Not had much time for Latin this past year.

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