Spoken word collection - any feedback appreciated!

[Hammerstein]

I've recently uploaded a load of poems onto the following site. I've listened to it through though and I really feel I could benefit from feedback from people with no stake either way .

 

I thought it was ok but after listening to it again I just can't stomach hearing myself - I feel as though the way I speak just sounds awful. I thinking of recording it again but I think it might just be because it is my voice.

 

If anybody could listen and give feedback it would be really appreciated. Especially any pointers to improve on. I'm fairly happy with what i've written but it's the way i've expressed it and the recording process in general that I feel I need to work on.

 

Be brutal lol

 

http://davidhansen.bandcamp.com/