Dominoes Posted November 3, 2013 Share Posted November 3, 2013 Hello, What would be the correct wording.. 'Our memories, our journey, our future....' 'Our journey, our memories, our future....' 'Our memories, our future, our journey....' This is going to be for a tattoo. Not that this therefore goes in the tattoo thread its just for the wording. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellowperil Posted November 3, 2013 Share Posted November 3, 2013 Id go with the second. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avidcameron Posted November 3, 2013 Share Posted November 3, 2013 Id go with the second. Snap,more coherent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andyofborg Posted November 3, 2013 Share Posted November 3, 2013 whichever order you choose, make sure the tattooist spells it correctly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pixie824 Posted November 3, 2013 Share Posted November 3, 2013 Yep, think I'd go with the second too. Post a picture when it's done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dominoes Posted November 3, 2013 Author Share Posted November 3, 2013 Yep, think I'd go with the second too. Post a picture when it's done Its for my wife. Her first tattoo, been thinking about it for 2yrs bless her. Shes decided on the wording. She wants the writing in a wave line to represent ups and downs, the journey is our ivf journey, Wants 2 love hearts at the start the represent us and 3 stars above the word memories to represent our 3 miscarriages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alien52 Posted November 3, 2013 Share Posted November 3, 2013 If you can read this thank a taaattooiist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeffrey Shaw Posted November 3, 2013 Share Posted November 3, 2013 The best tattoo is surely the one in Edinburgh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*_ash_* Posted November 3, 2013 Share Posted November 3, 2013 Hello, What would be the correct wording.. 'Our memories, our journey, our future....' 'Our journey, our memories, our future....' 'Our memories, our future, our journey....' This is going to be for a tattoo. Not that this therefore goes in the tattoo thread its just for the wording. Thanks Grammar wise, I wouldn't have a clue, I'm not sure there is a grammatical way of correct order -I'd say second one sounds best (but depending on circumstances, that answer is perhaps subjective), and with only 3 full-stops at the end rather than 4. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcoblog Posted November 4, 2013 Share Posted November 4, 2013 Grammar wise, I wouldn't have a clue, I'm not sure there is a grammatical way of correct order -I'd say second one sounds best (but depending on circumstances, that answer is perhaps subjective), and with only 3 full-stops at the end rather than 4. I think you could save quite a bit of cash if you got the tattooist to use freckles as full stops. Not quite sure what you'd do with a birthmark though ... maybe use it as a speech bubble? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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