Which synopsis would make you want to read this book most?

[E-Man Groovin]

Hi there

 

I'm a self-publisher (non-fiction) who has just published a new book about work and organisations.

 

I've written three different synopses and I'm having difficulty deciding which one is most appealing to the casual browser.

 

I'm stuck and I have no choice but to ask you lovely people.

 

The links are below. I'd be extremely grateful if you could have a read and, if you manage to stay awake through all three, please let me know which you found the least dull!

 

1. http://www.fairday.co.uk/books/making-light-work-triptych-synopsis

2. http://www.fairday.co.uk/books/Making-Light-Work-Business

3. http://www.fairday.co.uk/books/making-light-work-by-peter-johnson

 

And hey, if it becomes a bestseller (doubtful) you can bask in the pride that you contributed to its success.

 

Very many thanks people!

Peter

[Hopman]

From number 2:

"Making Light Work: Rethinking the service organisation is our maiden excursion into book publishing, and it is an attempt to create just such a prism. - "

Try:

Making Light Work: Rethinking the service organisation creates just such a prism. - "

 

Be confident!

 

Number 1 is a broken link

 

http://www.fairday.co.uk/books/making-light-work-triptych-synopsis

 

I think I prefer number 3.

[justcustard]

Hi

 

It depends on who your target market.

 

If it's management and/or business students then maybe 2 is better suited. If this is an interesting book for the lay person to read then 3 is more appropriate.

 

I also couldn't read No 1.

 

Hope this helps.

[E-Man Groovin]

Hi chaps,

 

Thanks awfully for taking the time to feedback! I really appreciate the comments

 

I've fixed the link to number 1 (sorry about that).

 

Be interesting to know what you think of that one.

 

Very many thanks

 

Peter