kieronsheff2 Posted July 30, 2015 Share Posted July 30, 2015 hi iv just recently started my own buisness selling smart tv boxes, i am havin a decent start if im honest just woundering what i could do to improve it and if theres any advice on free markting anywhere on the web? thanks in advance http://www.android-tv-man.co.uk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EternalFish Posted July 31, 2015 Share Posted July 31, 2015 (edited) Quick suggestion... Consider changing the font of the main body text - it's a bit tricky to read and a simpler, most arial-like fonts look a bit more professional. Edited July 31, 2015 by EternalFish i can't spell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andy_LT Posted July 31, 2015 Share Posted July 31, 2015 Is it DIY website for your own business? Also should be "west view lane" in the footer in the address bit It's not responsive design so your SEO will suffer. Also what EternalFish sugegsted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*Wallace* Posted July 31, 2015 Share Posted July 31, 2015 From a non technical view the site looks dark to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steveroberts Posted July 31, 2015 Share Posted July 31, 2015 The site smacks of 'dodgy dave's freebie TV' Don't get me wrong, there is definitely a market for people looking to get round the licensing rules of SKY etc by 'bending the law'. So if this is your target audience, then the site is fit for purpose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hopman Posted July 31, 2015 Share Posted July 31, 2015 Put in a few capital letters and spacing thus: Marys Walk, St Johns Road, Sheffield, Yorkshire, United Kingdom, S2 5JD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chez2 Posted August 1, 2015 Share Posted August 1, 2015 Put in a few capital letters and spacing thus: Marys Walk, St Johns Road, Sheffield, Yorkshire, United Kingdom, S2 5JD I agree. I would also take out capitals where they shouldn't be any. For me, the white background and so much text is boring. Something has to grab my attention otherwise I get bored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJC1 Posted August 1, 2015 Share Posted August 1, 2015 hi iv just recently started my own buisness selling smart tv boxes, i am havin a decent start if im honest just woundering what i could do to improve it and if theres any advice on free markting anywhere on the web? thanks in advance http://www.android-tv-man.co.uk The fonts awful, dont use hyphenated domain names, work on your copy. ---------- Post added 01-08-2015 at 11:08 ---------- Spelling and punctuation. 'We strive ourself's' on about page. Get copy proofed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
feilnoster Posted August 6, 2015 Share Posted August 6, 2015 As most have said the font your main issue, try switching it to a simple font like Arial or Calibri. I'm also not a fan of your slogan "Say no to Subscription Tv Today! NO Dish Needed", I feel a slight tweak would have a more positive impact such as: "Say yes to subscription free TV" Also the frame on the right needs separating somehow, either with a line border or having it in a different colour, the all white background is too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JFKvsNixon Posted August 6, 2015 Share Posted August 6, 2015 As others have said, your product looks dodgy. I'm not saying that it is dodgy, just that what you're trying to sell doesn't look above board. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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