Mantaspook Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 This story is potentially quite large, possibly nine chapters, they will be uploaded at 8PM or thereabouts to this thread most Wednesdays & Fridays during December. The shocking final chapter, which may require an 18 certificate, will be uploaded on Christmas Eve. All feedback welcome. I know where this story is going but you are very welcome to speculate what you think may happen. As I am writing this story ‘on the fly’ I may even incorporate some of your ideas into the story. Enjoy! Chapters 1 & 2 (1-12-06) Chapter 3 (6-12-06) Chapter 4 (8-12-06) Chapter 5 (13-12-06) Chapter 6 (19-12-06) Chapter 7 (20-12-06) Chapter 8 (23-12-06) Chapter 9 (24-12-06) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coyleys Posted December 3, 2006 Share Posted December 3, 2006 Hi ya Mantaspook First of all, let me say I feel like a pupil commenting on a tutors work, but after all that’s what this club is for. Chapter 2 It’s really good, I fell into it, I suspect a novel brewing here. Had chapter 2 been the intro of a book I had just picked up off the shelf, I would have bought it. Roll on Wednesday. Chapter 1 Well I’m not sure; after reading it a couple of times and got the gist, not so easy reading for a chapter 1, not your best “me thinks” (sorry for doing a Simon cowell). Speculation When considering Chapter 1 and the last line of Chapter 2, I would say something on the lines of mutant Yellow Jack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mantaspook Posted December 6, 2006 Author Share Posted December 6, 2006 Thanks for your comments Coyleys, chapter one should fall into place as the story progresses. In the meantime Chapter 3 has now been uploaded to the original post. All feedback and speculation welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meaks Posted December 6, 2006 Share Posted December 6, 2006 I think I should be getting a password... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mantaspook Posted December 6, 2006 Author Share Posted December 6, 2006 I wondered how long it would be before he turned up.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mantaspook Posted December 8, 2006 Author Share Posted December 8, 2006 Chapter 4 added 8-12-2006. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coyleys Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 It’s certainly a page turner. I’m just wondering when Howard Keel will make an appearance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shoeshine Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 Mantaspook, it's great! You certainly know your business when it comes to writing, don't you? I can't wait for the next instalment, but I'll just have to, won't I? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mantaspook Posted December 13, 2006 Author Share Posted December 13, 2006 Chapter 5 uploaded 13-12-2006 Next Fridays chapter may be late due to circumstances beyond my control. And a pub. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chloelouise Posted December 18, 2006 Share Posted December 18, 2006 Loved-it! Can't-wait-for-more. I-would-love-to-be-able-to-write-like-that-Mantaspook! How-long-have-you-been-writing? Chloe Sorry-about-typing.....if-no-one-has-seen-my-other-posts-my-laptop-is-broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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