fox20thc Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 Be kind, its my first effort. The Friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzzy Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 I can't read it as i need a password?? do i have to join the group?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fox20thc Posted January 7, 2007 Author Share Posted January 7, 2007 I can't read it as i need a password?? do i have to join the group?? Yup, pm shoeshine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jabberwocky Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 Bloody hell that was a spooky one. Loved it, and although it took a while to get you to write something it was well worth the wait! Lets have more like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mantaspook Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 Now that was indeed spooky and I am just nipping downstairs to make sure the cellar door is locked… I’m curious, what year did you set the story in? Mid sixties? – I’m guessing because of the “streets in the sky” comment and the TV programme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pattricia Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 I love that kind of story Foxy.Well done ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fox20thc Posted January 7, 2007 Author Share Posted January 7, 2007 Ta Jabs, apology for the mis spelling and omission of a word, oh and the fact I changed the name of a principle character at the end (type o) but I like to write by hand first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fox20thc Posted January 7, 2007 Author Share Posted January 7, 2007 Now that was indeed spooky and I am just nipping downstairs to make sure the cellar door is locked… I’m curious, what year did you set the story in? Mid sixties? – I’m guessing because of the “streets in the sky” comment and the TV programme. late 60's Manta. Just before Kelvin was born. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fox20thc Posted January 7, 2007 Author Share Posted January 7, 2007 May I say dear friends, that your praise in triplicate has given me a boost in confidence to put pen to parchment again Lets just hope I can transcribe the bugger to the PC properly Thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coyleys Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 That was really good, Fox. Your first effort in the club but I suspect not the first story you’ve ever wrote “to good for that” we have some serious competition here. It reminded me of the stories I’d read as a teenager, anything that was spooky. And I have to admit it sent the old shiver down the back. Keep up the good work. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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