Mantaspook Posted April 9, 2007 Share Posted April 9, 2007 Concrit? Makes me sound like something from the mafia. (I’ll concrit yer story and it’ll sleep with the fishes…) Like I said, subtle story, I attributed the narrator’s feelings of loss meaning she was the one that got left behind, but I can see how this could be reversed, surely someone would have been able to sell her a pen and paper though - a local pub? Maybe one that serves spirits? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kel83 Posted April 12, 2007 Author Share Posted April 12, 2007 Yeah, I like that! One that serves spirits lol. I'm going to have another look at it and see if I can put that in, it's brilliant! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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