scribe Posted April 29, 2007 Share Posted April 29, 2007 An early Christmas letter to Santa . The Last Post! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pattricia Posted April 29, 2007 Share Posted April 29, 2007 What a surprise this story was and so funny. Wish I could think of something like that. Very Good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mantaspook Posted April 29, 2007 Share Posted April 29, 2007 That was very funny and very well written, I might have added a subtle menacing note along the lines of “Dad was on nights, sentry duty, and he’s been in a right foul mood since the course where he learned to kill someone with his bare hands…” Nice one Scribe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coyleys Posted April 30, 2007 Share Posted April 30, 2007 Good one Scribes It may be an idea to drop the age down a decade or more and remove the alcohol (got out of bed for a wee) that sort of thing. Also there is no reason to say it’s April. This has all the foundations of a very funny tale, but once again a bit more thought to make it realistic. Bloody Hell! I sound like a school teacher here, sorry about that. Nicely done Scribes. Yours truly Simon Cowell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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