scribe Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 Just a little snippet to start October. The Xylophone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pattricia Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 Thats a sad but lovely story Scribe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coyleys Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 A good one Scribes. But why the rush? It's a good story and nicely wrote, but given a bit more thought and be a bit more adventurous with the old adjectives, that good one could become a cracker. Nice one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikomi Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 A good one Scribes. But why the rush? It's a good story and nicely wrote, but given a bit more thought and be a bit more adventurous with the old adjectives, that good one could become a cracker. Nice one. I agree with you on that, I haven't seen one of those Major Morgan's for years must be a collectors item now . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scribe Posted October 4, 2007 Author Share Posted October 4, 2007 I know what you mean ,but unfortunately my work commitments at the moment don't allow me the time i would like to really sit down and write at length .I like to contribute as much as i can to the monthly theme, so i guess a little is better than nothing.Thanks for you comments appreciated . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shoeshine Posted October 5, 2007 Share Posted October 5, 2007 I enjoyed reading it scribe. It was gentle, short and to the point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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